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Those Empty Eyes by Charlie Donlea
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Charlie Donlea has crafted a complex novel of crime and sleuthing with plenty of suspense in his latest standalone novel, Those Empty Eyes . It features Alex Armstrong who has legally changed her name in addition to changing her appearance and backstory. Ten years ago, she was the traumatized teenager, Alexandra Quinlan. Alexandra was accused of killing her family and was led from the family home in handcuffs. The media nicknamed her “Empty Eyes”. With the help of lawyers, she fought to clear her name and won a defamation lawsuit.

Despite ten years passing, Alex continues to search for answers about her family’s murders. She’s now a legal investigator for the law firm that helped her clear her name. She works to investigate potential clients and to secure justice for clients. Her next case is Matthew Claymore, a college student, who’s being questioned by the police in the disappearance of his girlfriend, Laura McAllister. As Alex investigates, she finds connections to her family’s murder.

Readers can easily root for Alex and hope she can succeed in life and in solving the murders of her family. She tirelessly seeks evidence to identify that killer and to support the legal firm’s clients’ claims of innocence. She’s organized and hard-working, but struggles for normalcy and balance in her life. There are numerous supporting characters that provide support, conflict, interest, and stability.

What a beginning! Donlea captured my interest with the first couple of paragraphs. The complicated and multi-layered plot moves back and forth in time and shifts focus to incidents that feel very disconnected. This affected the pacing and distracted me at times, but the author managed to weave the threads and connect the dots into a suspenseful and shocking tale as the story progressed.

The author is a superb storyteller and manages to surprise readers as the reveal occurs. I felt for Alex throughout the novel and wanted her to succeed. But what really happens? I had suspected part of the ending, but other parts were a bolt out of the blue. Themes include murder, friendship, family, survivor’s guilt, values, integrity, ill treatment of minors, and much more.

Overall, this compelling story grabbed my attention with likeable characters, a harrowing escape, and multiple mysteries. Great characterization, plenty of investigations, some suspenseful moments, and an action-packed ending make this a recommended book. I could easily see this book being the first in a series featuring Alex. I’m looking forward to reading more books by this author.

Kensington Books and Charlie Donlea provided a complimentary digital ARC of this novel via NetGalley. All opinions expressed in this review are my own. The publication date is currently set for March 28, 2023. This review was originally posted at Mystery and Suspense Magazine.
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Reading Progress

February 25, 2023 – Shelved
February 25, 2023 – Shelved as: to-read
March 7, 2023 – Started Reading
March 8, 2023 – Shelved as: mys-sus-mag-2023
March 8, 2023 – Shelved as: mystery-thriller-suspense
March 8, 2023 – Shelved as: netgalley-2023
March 8, 2023 – Shelved as: read-2023
March 8, 2023 – Finished Reading

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message 1: by C. (Comment, never msg). (last edited Mar 09, 2023 08:56PM) (new)

C.  (Comment, never msg). I am glad you enjoyed this book. How do you arrive at decimal points? I use whole numbers. For them to work with adequate shades of preference and quality across the board, we need ten star grades. I'm not including you here but I don't think people get that five stars cut into halves, does not work out equal to ten star grades. I wrote an article about it which I should share.

At issue is Goodreads' terrible new book page layout; at least for slow rural internet. It prioritizes "apps" and leaves slow ISPs in the dust. I am glad to finally visit reviews of a sweet person who often graces mine, Pam. *Hugs*.


PamG C. (Never PM. Comment, or e-mail if private!) wrote: "I am glad you enjoyed this book. How do you arrive at decimal points? I use whole numbers. For them to work with adequate shades of preference and quality across the board, we need ten star grades...."

Thanks, Carolyn. Last July, I decided I wanted to try to get more consistency in my ratings. I set up a spreadsheet with various aspects of the books (e.g premise, characterization, etc. and weighted their average for 75% of the score and then overall enjoyment is weighted at 25% of the score.

While it usually doesn't change my rating, if I'm waffling between two ratings, it helps. Anything x.5 and up is rounded up. Anything x.49 and below is rounded down.

Hopefully, GR will continue to tweak the book page layout based on user feedback. I've seen a couple of minor changes, but nothing significant.


C.  (Comment, never msg). Which changes have you seen? Are you saying you dislike the new layout too? I assume most people have high-speed internet but wonder if you use an app or PC.


PamG C. (Never PM. Comment, or e-mail if private!) wrote: "Which changes have you seen? Are you saying you dislike the new layout too? I assume most people have high-speed internet but wonder if you use an app or PC."

One change from when they first released the new page is that it once again shows any GR Giveaways for the books. That was initially missing.

The new page is somewhat irritating to me. There's always an add for a book at the top of the book page that is generally unrelated to the book page you're looking at. I understand wanting to advertise Amazon's books, but they could at least make it similar. Additionally, the add takes up too much space on the page. The book cover images are too large. You have to scroll forever to get to the other books in the series. Before, they were near the author page. etc., etc.

I use a PC and have high-speed internet. I rarely use the app, but have occasionally used it.


message 5: by C. (Comment, never msg). (last edited Mar 11, 2023 06:33PM) (new)

C.  (Comment, never msg). Ah, thanks to high-speed internet, your issues aren't the near inability to use the pages. I'll gladly take "scroll" forever to "load forever, if at all"! Good to know other people are helping with complaints.

My opposite complaint with bookcover art is that Goodreads removed "expand" to see enlarged detail. I know what you mean: this layout similar to my problem with Amazon, is each section loading separately. A hassle of scrolling for you, impossibility of the information appearing for me.

North American giveaways being inclusive to Canadians is another issue. It is unbelieveable if publishers won't fork out more to include all three countries.


ReadAlongWithSue recovering from a stroke★⋆. ࿐࿔ PamG wrote: "C. (Never PM. Comment, or e-mail if private!) wrote: "I am glad you enjoyed this book. How do you arrive at decimal points? I use whole numbers. For them to work with adequate shades of preference ..."

That’s a brilliant idea👍


PamG ReadAlongWithSue wrote: "PamG wrote: "C. (Never PM. Comment, or e-mail if private!) wrote: "I am glad you enjoyed this book. How do you arrive at decimal points? I use whole numbers. For them to work with adequate shades o..."

Thanks!


Sunflowerbooklover Fabulous review Pam! I’m such a fan of his too!!


PamG Kendall wrote: "Fabulous review Pam! I’m such a fan of his too!!"

Thanks, Kendall! This is the first book I've read by the author, but I definitely want to read more of his books.


message 10: by Zoeytron (new)

Zoeytron Really good review, Pam!


message 11: by Andrea (new)

Andrea Great review. 🌞


Dorie  - Cats&Books :) Great review, dang I should have picked this one up when I had a chance :)


message 13: by PamG (new) - rated it 4 stars

PamG Zoeytron wrote: "Really good review, Pam!"

Thank you!


message 14: by PamG (new) - rated it 4 stars

PamG Andrea wrote: "Great review. 🌞"

Thanks, Andrea!


message 15: by PamG (new) - rated it 4 stars

PamG Dorie - Cats&Books :) wrote: "Great review, dang I should have picked this one up when I had a chance :)"

Thanks, Dorie. I know how it is. I've had to add several books to my "to buy" list when I didn't request something and it turned out to be great.


Carolyn Terrific review Pam, I loved this one too. I hope there is a sequel.


message 17: by Pam (new)

Pam Baddeley Great review, Pam.


message 18: by PamG (new) - rated it 4 stars

PamG Carolyn wrote: "Terrific review Pam, I loved this one too. I hope there is a sequel."

Thanks, Carolyn. I hope so too!


message 19: by PamG (new) - rated it 4 stars

PamG Pam wrote: "Great review, Pam."

Thanks, Pam.


Sandysbookaday Glad you enjoyed this Pam. Great review. ❤


message 21: by Dee (new) - rated it 4 stars

Dee Vanderveer Love this review! It is spot on for me 💖


message 22: by PamG (new) - rated it 4 stars

PamG Dee wrote: "Love this review! It is spot on for me 💖"

Thanks, Dee!


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Angela Fabulous review, Pam! After finishing reading your review all I want to do now is start this one 😂


message 24: by PamG (new) - rated it 4 stars

PamG Angela wrote: "Fabulous review, Pam! After finishing reading your review all I want to do now is start this one 😂"

Thanks, Angela. Happy Reading!


Jennifer (Jaye) (catching up slowly) Excellent review PamG, sounds intriguing 💖💖💖


message 26: by PamG (new) - rated it 4 stars

PamG Jennifer (Jaye) SK wrote: "Excellent review PamG, sounds intriguing 💖💖💖"

Thanks, Jennifer. It was.


Carole But right off the bat, something totally implausible. A prosecuting attorney can not cross examine a key witness in a case who happens to be HIS WIFE. That’s called conflict of witness and is not allowed. Didn’t author do any research for this book, because this has almost ruined it for me!!


message 28: by PamG (new) - rated it 4 stars

PamG Carole wrote: "But right off the bat, something totally implausible. A prosecuting attorney can not cross examine a key witness in a case who happens to be HIS WIFE. That’s called conflict of witness and is not a..."

Sorry it's not working for you. I just went with it; despite the implausible scene.


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